Friday, 15 April 2016
Thursday, 14 April 2016
its very very sour LEMON EXPERIENCE
It taste like a very very sour i never taste in my life i will never never eat again a lemon and it is fresh but i don't like it it's just like a bomb of sour it's smell like sour and fresh i feel like a cold rough .
Tuesday, 12 April 2016
Thursday, 7 April 2016
THE CHOCOLATE WRITING
We are learning to
put passion into our writing and make it more exciting to read.
Attempt 1:
I feel it a smooth and a coffee and chocolate. it square and yummy and the top of it he had a name carbury. it smell like a milo and smell like a coffee and a chocolate cake. it so yummy and full of sugar the chocolate is melting on my tongue and it full of sugar in my tongue.
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Attempt 2:
I feel the sweet smooth chocolate coffee.It a cube and yummy and top i see a name it name carbury milk. It smell like a chocolate sugar and milo and smell like a chocolate coffee cake. The chocolate is full of sugar and smelting in my tongue just like a burning ice on my tongue.
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Attempt 3:
I think is smooth chocolate milk and a melting chocolate coffee and burning from the dragon fire breath.is see a many many mountain in the chocolate and a sugar mountain with a chocolate a sugar on the top.
My tongue is just breaking and a earthquake in my tongue because of the sweet of the chocolate milk.
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Attempt 4:
It smooth like a marshmallow chocolate coffee milk is melting on my tongue and my tongue is just like a punching the sweet.i see a chocolate hills in the chocolate bar and a berry and the top and a toppings. My tongue is just a broken bricks and broken glass on my tongue because of the sweet chocolate milk coffee and a burning house in my tongue because of the so so sweet chocolate milk coffee.
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Attempt 5:
When i was taste my chocolate milk coffee just like i am in the paradise and i been eat all the chocolate milk coffee because of the heavenly sweet of the chocolate milk coffee. I see a chocolate hills mountain and i see a volcano and i see on the top on the chocolate hills mountain there’s a name on it the name is cadbury dairy milk and some toppings. My tongue is a earthquake a there a shooting rocks from the space and a tsunami and a many fire with a dragon breath because of the so sweet.
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Tuesday, 5 April 2016
Goodbye Summer, Hello Autumn Poem
We wrote Goodbye Summer, Hello Autumn poems. It's about things we don't do anymore in Autumn and things we start doing in Autumn.
I had two attempts. The second one is made better by using better words.
Here is mine.
Thursday 17 March
Goodbye Summer, hello autumn
Goodbye beautiful hot sun, hello freezing wind
Goodbye delicious ice cream, hello hots noodles
Goodbye cool cold drinks, hello hots soup
Goodbye cool cold drinks, hello hots soup
Goodbye tents and campfires, hello TV and computers
Goodbye swimming pools, hello warm baths
Goodbye sunblock, hello lotion
Goodbye sunny day, hello freezing cold windy night and day
Goodbye gardening plants, hello dying plants
Attempt 2:
Friday 18 March
Goodbye Summer, hello Autumn
Goodbye lovely boiling sun, hello icy wind
Goodbye tasteful chocolate ice cream, hello spicy delicious noodles
Goodbye chilly freezing drinking lemonade, hello boiling carrot soup
Goodbye camping and cooked marshmallow, hello Cartoons network
Goodbye cold swimming pool, hello warm bubbles bath
Goodbye sunscreen and sunblock, hello jacket
Goodbye shining day, hello icy cold night
Goodbye planting growing plants, hello cold and crunchy dying plants
GOODBYE SUMMER, HELLO AUTUMN
Wednesday, 16 March 2016
Reptiles
We have been learning about reptiles in reading.
I did some activities about reptiles. Here are my activities. I enjoyed the activities because they were fun and helped my learning. I learnt that reptiles have scales and are cold-blooded. They lay eggs on the land to protect their eggs from larger animals.
About Reptiles
I did some activities about reptiles. Here are my activities. I enjoyed the activities because they were fun and helped my learning. I learnt that reptiles have scales and are cold-blooded. They lay eggs on the land to protect their eggs from larger animals.
About Reptiles
Most of them lay eggs in the land to cover them eggs from the other animals. They are a cold-blooded animals they have scales there have a habitats the many eggs is not survive because they are the favourite food of many larger animals.
Information Web
Most reptiles lay eggs on the land-->because to protect eggs from the other animals
They are cold-blooded-->it means that reptiles do not have to be always eating to keep their warm.
They have scales---->because to protect them selve from the predator.
Most of them eggs is not survive---> because they are the favourite food of many larger animals.
My Ultimate Reptile
He has strong flippers. He has a strong shield from the other animals. and he lay eggs on the land to protect their eggs from the larger animals and other animals.
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