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Tuesday 21 June 2016

This is my Emotion Writing

WALT: Use exciting and descriptive vocabulary and language features to describe emotions.

Attempt 1:He jumping in the sky like a free frog with his friend, and there like have fun with jumping, and while he is in the air he looks like he make the jump to the other side and, his friend are waiting in the other side.
Attempt 2:He jumped in the sky like a free frog with his friend and, there like having fun with his friend’s and while he is in the air it's  looks like he gonna make it the jump to the other side and, his friend are waiting in the other side of their place in the mountain.


Attempt 1:He touching his head he looks confused and, he looks like don’t know what to do and while his touch his hair and he look like he forget something and he trying to solve a quest but he don’t know what is the answer, and while he look something that he don’t know what is it.
Attempt 2: While his touching his head and he looks confused and he looks don’t know what to do and while his touching his head and he looks like he forgot something and he trying to solve a question but he don’t know what is the answer, and next he looking something that he don’t know what is it.


Attempt 1:There looks like happy because there have a picnic. And there look like have a game the in is the girl she tag the boy.And there hands are in the top I don't know  what's happening it's looks like they're excited to go to a place that special.
Attempt 2:There looks like happy because there having a picnic, And there look like having a game and the in is the girl she tagging the boy.And there hands are in the top I don't know  what's happening it's looks like they're excited to go to a place that special, and they’re not seen yet.

This is my Rock Paper Scissor Writing

Have you ever wondered what would happen if Rock, Paper and Scissors met each other? Watch the video below to see what could happen.
Pay close attention to the different characters. Your task is to write a character description for each Rock, Paper and Scissors.

Think about:
  • What do they look like?
BUT The following are even more important
  • What attributes/characteristics do they have?
  • What attitude have they each chosen?
  • How do they “Be There” for each other if at all?


Use adjectives (Wow words).
Use similes and metaphors to make your descriptions more interesting.
Punctuate your descriptions correctly.
Avoid writing a huge lump of description- keep it controlled.
Nouns and verbs are your friends. Adjectives and adverbs can be your friends, or your enemies, depending on how you use them.


Rock Character Description

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Rock is very kind to  paper
Rock is protective who loves him and he love
Rock is very  careness to paper
Rock is very curios
Rock is fall in love in paper
Rock is a life saver
Rock is very helpful to paper
He looks scary in the outside but he is friendly in the inside
Rock is very great person to paper
Paper Character Description

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Paper is very
Scared from scissor
Paper is a beautiful that's why Rock is fall in love with her
Paper is very protective to her flower and she make
Paper is very kind to rock
Paper miss rock when rock is died
Paper is great person to rock
Paper is a like a princess of paper
Paper is just like a butterfly because she has wings
Scissors Character Description

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Scissor is very bad
Scissor is trying to kill paper
Scissor is trying to defeat rock
Destroying everything when he walk and past
Nervous when rock jumped
Scissor is killer because he wants to kill paper
Why scissor wants to kill paper?
Is Scissor angry with paper?
Scissor is like angry to paper but i don’t know why scissor angry with paper.
When scissor attack rock he just like what! i attack him why he is not dead!

This is my Mintie experience

Mintie Writing Week 1

Looking still wrapped
What do you see?
  • Pictures
  • The Mintie label
  • Colours- red, white, green
  • Rectangular shaped
  • Words
  • Block
  • Patterns
  • Logo
  • The opening
  • The ends are like a fan
  • Crinkley bits
What do you smell?
  • Like fresh bubblegum
  • Mint plant
  • Fresh paper
  • After dinner mints
  • Eclipse mints
  • The wrapper
What do you feel?
  • Squishy
  • Feels hard like a brick
  • The wrapper
  • Hard boiled egg
  • It’s firm
  • The faces of a block


Looking without wrapper
What do you see?
  • A rectangular prism
  • Small lines on the lolly
  • Tiny holes
  • Uneven ends
  • Scrunched paper
  • Like a block of ice
What do you smell?
  • Mint
  • Strong, sweet smell
  • Condensed milk mixture
  • Fresh paper
  • Fresh poison ivy
What do you feel?
  • A hard sticky block
  • Bumpy
  • Sticky and hard
  • Soft, smooth sides
What do you hear when you open it?
  • Crunching of the wrapper
  • Crackling like a chip packet
  • Bacon sizzling in the pan

Tasting
What do you see?
What do you smell?
What do you feel?
  • Edible stone
  • While you’re eating it it gets softer
  • Still stuck to your teeth
  • Dissolving on my tongue
  • Had to use my tongue to take it out of my teeth
  • The freshness of an ice block
What do you taste?
  • Like toothpaste
  • Heating up in my mouth
  • Like banana?
  • Very delicious
  • A minty explosion
  • Like minty milk
  • Like peppermint tic tacs
  • Chewy bubblegum



I was looking at pure, white rectangular mintie in my hand, then i was taste it like a chewy gum. im looking without wrapper and the pure white rectangle  has holes and it just like a block of ice. it feel like soft. Smooth side. It smell like mint and a strong, sweet smell. i hear a crunching of the wrapper. And now i'm gonna taste it feel like Edible stone and the freshness of an ice block and taste like a toothpaste, a minty explosion and very very delicious.

Monday 20 June 2016

KIWI CAN RECOUNT

This is my KIWI CAN RECOUNT KIWI CAN RECOUNT

  • We have talk about Katie holiday
  • And we have a play called bubbet
  • And we have an act
  • First we have condition
  • Jasmine is gonna be the teacher
  • Ryan and Levi are who the broke the Chromebook
  • And me i'm gonna told to the teacher
  • We act
  • And we have GKQ’s

To day we went a kiwi can with my math teacher and my classmate. In every week we do only ones in a time. Because if all the children go to kiwi can it's cannot fit, because we gonna have a game, and we have a game together we not have a space for all children to run around.


First: we have a talk about our holiday in the Saturday and in the Sunday, to day we have not talk about our holidays because to day we talk about our team leader holiday, because she have a holiday and she do an activities in her holiday one of the activities are hiking but, i don't know where she went.


Second: we have a game called bubbet, it's human version of bubbet, when i was having a game i got a wrong move and i got out and the winner is ELLA and RYKIN. And we have a acting about honest, and the characters are Jasmine is gonna be the teacher, Ryan and Levi are the broke the Chromebook, And Emily R. are who trying to stop Ryan AND Levi to fight, and me i'm gonna do boring character i'm gonna told them  to the teacher.


Last: but, not the least. We have a GKQ’s. I’m gonna told you how it works. First we gonna do an action is a buzzer  to get you up and say the answer. Second: the team leader gonna asked a question and if we got an answer, we have to do  the buzzer and answer the question, and when you have a wrong answer you can do it again, and have a go again.


Oh! i forgot to mention to you. i forgot to say who is the team leaders in kiwi can. It's Ricky and Katie but, there’s a new leader his name is Nathan. he gonna replace Riki place because Ricky is going to horny high.