This is my Emotion Writing

WALT: Use exciting and descriptive vocabulary and language features to describe emotions.

	Attempt 1:He jumping in the sky like a free frog with his friend, and there like have fun with jumping, and while he is in the air he looks like he make the jump to the other side and, his friend are waiting in the other side.
	Attempt 2:He jumped in the sky like a free frog with his friend and, there like having fun with his friend’s and while he is in the air it's  looks like he gonna make it the jump to the other side and, his friend are waiting in the other side of their place in the mountain.

	Attempt 1:He touching his head he looks confused and, he looks like don’t know what to do and while his touch his hair and he look like he forget something and he trying to solve a quest but he don’t know what is the answer, and while he look something that he don’t know what is it.
	Attempt 2: While his touching his head and he looks confused and he looks don’t know what to do and while his touching his head and he looks like he forgot something and he trying to solve a question but he don’t know what is the answer, and next he looking something that he don’t know what is it.

	Attempt 1:There looks like happy because there have a picnic. And there look like have a game the in is the girl she tag the boy.And there hands are in the top I don't know  what's happening it's looks like they're excited to go to a place that special.
	Attempt 2:There looks like happy because there having a picnic, And there look like having a game and the in is the girl she tagging the boy.And there hands are in the top I don't know  what's happening it's looks like they're excited to go to a place that special, and they’re not seen yet.