Dog are the best

We have been learning how to write persuasive writing. We had to convince miss Mcleod  to either get a cat or a dog. I choose to persuade miss Mcleod to get a dog. This is my persuasive writing. I had to use persuasive words and phrases that were convincing.
I learned a lot of things like persuasive or convincing words.\

Collaborative Success Criteria

• The correct structure of a persuasive text including an introduction, with a hook and your opinion, 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion.
• Persuasive vocabulary and phrases that convince people
• The reasons why with supporting ideas

                                      Dogs are the best

Did you know you can train dogs?

I think miss mcleod should have dog because the dogs are playful, they can warn you if there is visitor or a bad person and you can train them to do tricks.

The first reason why should miss Mcleod get a dog because they are playful,  for example when you were bored they can play with them. You can play fetch with them. They are also very energetic. There are always happy and jumping when there see you.

A second reason that miss Mcleod should buy a dog because you can train them to do cool tricks like getting the newspaper and do normals like sit. You can also train them to be a police dog. When you were  in a crime, you are the police and you have a dog you can tell your dog to sniff the footprint and there things that there left.

The last reason why miss Mcleod should get or buy a dog because they can warn you if there’s is visitor or intruder while you are sleeping. This is helpful because if there is a intruder, if your dog bark you can look outside and call police faster without the intruder noticing,  and if there is a visitor and you were sleeping they can wake you up. They could be your clock by barking in the morning if you are sleepy.

Overall, I think miss Mcleod should get a dog because they are playful, they can warn you and you can also train them. Contact your pet shop now and get the best friend you will ever have!!!