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Monday, 27 November 2017

The Brothers Of Wild West

The Brothers Of Wild West

It was a blazing hot day at the deserted Wild west. When the two brothers were born at a rusty old wooden house named John and Mateo. Their parents divorce when after they just got born and there parents decided to take one child each. Mateo’s mother took him and Mateo became one of the head sheriff of wild west, but John’s father took him and became one of the most wanted criminals.

John has a gang to help him with his crime, the gang is called Raffaello, his the leader of the gang and John always planning What he should rob next. Mateo has a beautiful and a loving girlfriend named Emma, Mateo always exercise so he can be strong and ready when something bad happens.

One day the bank alarm was ringing so loudly that almost all the sheriff in the town heard it. It was John and his gang who set off the alarm. When Mateo heard the alarm he run as fast as he could to go to the bank to catch the criminal. He doesn't know it was his brother who set off the alarm and he doesn't know that he has a brother either. At the middle of the battlefield the two brothers look at each other like there are looking to a mirror.

Suddenly John called his gang, grabbed the money and quickly ride in their hidden horses to go to their hidden hideout. All the sheriff in the battle tried to catch them but it was too late. As soon as Mateo got home he asked her mother “Do I have a brother?” when his mother heard that, she cried and she said “yes” to Mateo. After that day as soon Mateo wake up he rapidly tried to find his brother and he even searched the entire village but he couldn’t find his brother.

There’s one way to solve this problem he has to find his dad and brother. (he didn’t know it at the first time). So Mateo left a letter to his mother and his girlfriend (Emma) about his leaving the village and trying to find his brother. There Mateo goes to his journey to find his father and brother.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Reige

    I love read your writing next time you can put wow words in anyway I like your writing and it was amzing.

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    1. Thank so much, I"ll definitely put wow words.

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  2. Hi Reige
    I love your narrative writing it was awesome to read [P]
    Your theme was alright [good job] [T]
    You could add more if you like because, I found it interesting to read.


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