Key idea - What are some examples of addiction on cellhpones?
What must you achive - Persuading the reader to not use their phones a lot.
In this paragraph I am trying to show/prove/explain that.
Infomrative
Key information you want to include.
1, How technology affect students.
2, How technology change students from the past and then now.
3, Consequences of technology towards students.
Delivery
Best paragraph structure to convey all this is.
Paragraph question:
Are students addicted to their cellphones?
If so, is that a problem?
Yes, some scientists has researched that some students who spend a long time on their phones has similar brains to drugged adults. It is a problem for most parents. Parenting this kind of child would be a havoc and would cause a problem towards family bonding time. According to the website PsychGuides.com, the human brain isn't finished devoloping until around the age of 25 years old. Meaning, if the brain is interfered by the blue rays of a phone it could have negative implications on brain devolopment. Overall, teenagers should not be spending a lot of time towards a cellphone.
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