Goodbye Summer, Hello Autumn Poem

We wrote Goodbye Summer, Hello Autumn poems. It's about things we don't do anymore in Autumn and things we start doing in Autumn.

I had two attempts. The second one is made better by using better words.

Here is mine.

Thursday 17 March

Goodbye Summer, hello autumn

Goodbye beautiful hot sun, hello freezing wind

Goodbye delicious ice cream,  hello hots noodles
Goodbye cool cold drinks, hello hots soup

Goodbye tents and campfires, hello TV and computers

Goodbye swimming pools, hello warm baths

Goodbye sunblock, hello lotion

Goodbye sunny day, hello freezing cold windy night and day

Goodbye gardening plants, hello dying plants

Attempt 2:

Friday 18 March

Goodbye Summer, hello Autumn

Goodbye lovely boiling sun, hello icy wind

Goodbye tasteful chocolate ice cream, hello spicy delicious noodles

Goodbye chilly freezing drinking lemonade, hello boiling carrot soup

Goodbye camping and cooked marshmallow, hello Cartoons network

Goodbye cold swimming pool, hello warm bubbles bath

Goodbye sunscreen and sunblock, hello jacket

Goodbye shining day, hello icy cold night

Goodbye planting growing plants, hello cold and crunchy dying plants

GOODBYE SUMMER, HELLO AUTUMN