this is my BFG Drawing

This is my Holiday Recount

July 9, 2016

The holiday was perfect to me because it's was my birthday and we have a spaghetti in my birthday, that's all i got in my birthday. Were have a games in the grass and in the  computer but i don't want to play in computer i want to play outside, but my brother wants to play in the computer but me i wants to play outside but he is not gonna play outside with me i just played with my baby brother but the ball is too big for him and his getting hurt and i gave him a small ball for him and big ball for me. When my birthday finish then we went to the clinic to have a injection because i'm 11 years old. And we went to the McDonald's restaurant to have our meal and i have a chicken nuggets, hamburger w/cheese, Float, and french fries and is so yummy and tasty. If i 'm in the house i'm gonna play only tablet computer and  football in our living room to have some fun. While we eating our baby brother is annoying and his just punching us but it's doesn't hurt because he is a baby and his little han and he wants in all the time to play with us with his ball and our ball. We just play with Our games, Rob lox, School of dragons, Comfy, two player game.net, in our tablet and computer.

With This story miss McLeod taught us how to write a recount about our Holidays. I needed to write title, orientation, sequence of events, and personal comments.

This is my Kiwi Can Recount

On Tuesday we went in Kiwi can, In the school hall.

First we introduce our self to Nathan, Nathan is our new Kiwi Can leader he took over Rickie, Because Rickie’s is going to Hornby high .

Second when we finish introducing our self and we have energise, energise means to play and move our body and have some fun with our friends.

Third when we finish our energise, our leaders question us about what we learn about our energise and the question us about our goals for writing and in sentence.

Fourth We have a game called GkQ, GKQ is about question but we have a groups and we have to choose a buzzer and an action, if we know the answer or we guess only we do the buzzer and the action and we stand up, we versusing the other groups.

Last our leaders and teacher chose points from our attitude and behavior, the teacher chose points out of 4 points, this tuesday we got 2 in teacher, Nathan chose points, out of 6 points he gave us 4 points, last leader Katie she got to chose 10 points, She gave us 7, our points for the week is 13, is not really good, but it's ok with us.

My favorite part of Kiwi Can is the energise because it's a lot of fun and i learn somethings about persisting, persist means keep trying and never give up, That's what i learn about energise, and in the Kiwi Can.

This is my Olympics Activity

I don't like vegetables, this is my writing about vegetables are yuck

(9) points =

He eating a carrot	He had a super eyesight	Super power can cause a problem	Get a lolie from others
He get right at test	He have a lolie	Ben is cheating	He don't like vegetable

(8) points designing a super hero.

This is the man who eat a carrot he have a super eyesight. the

(5) POINTS ABOUT BEN

At first, Ben didn't like vegetables,

He didn´t think there were edible.

Even an ice cream could not make him eat them,

He thought they was disgusting as a phlegm.

One day he read a book about man,

Who ate lots of carrots and had  super eyesight like Batman.

When Ben is in the house now he goes to the fridge,

He eats all the carrots to make his eyes better a little smidge.

One day he went to school and sat a test,

And the carrots made him do his best.

But actually, he saw the answers and got everything right,

And learned that cheating doesn't make him bright.

On Friday in the doctor's waiting room he found a new book,

So he decided to take a look.

He read about spinach and super strength….

Maybe his muscles will grow in length.

1. POINTS CHARACTERS IN THE STORY

BEN	Ben do not like a vegetable
MOTHER	Ben´s mother want to him to eat a vegetables

this is my apple drawing

THIS IS A SHORT POEM ABOUT BEN

At first, Ben didn't like vegetables,

He didn´t think there were edible.

Even an ice cream could not make him eat them,

He thought they was disgusting as a phlegm.

One day he read a book about man,

Who ate lots of carrots and had  super eyesight like Batman.

When Ben is in the house now he goes to the fridge,

He eats all the carrots to make his eyes better a little smidge.

One day he went to school and sat a test,

And the carrots made him do his best.

But actually, he saw the answers and got everything right,

And learned that cheating doesn't make him bright.

On Friday in the doctor's waiting room he found a new book,

So he decided to take a look.

He read about spinach and super strength….

Maybe his muscles will grow in length.

this is want i share