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Thursday, 7 July 2016

I don't like vegetables, this is my writing about vegetables are yuck

(9) points = ... tophat-yellow | by ...... Top hat owned by Floyd B. ...
He eating a carrot
He had a super eyesight
Super power can cause a problem
Get a lolie from others
He get right at test
He have a lolie
Ben is cheating
He don't like vegetable







(8) points designing a super hero.
This is the man who eat a carrot he have a super eyesight. the


(5) POINTS ABOUT BEN

At first, Ben didn't like vegetables,
He didn´t think there were edible.
Even an ice cream could not make him eat them,
He thought they was disgusting as a phlegm.
One day he read a book about man,
Who ate lots of carrots and had  super eyesight like Batman.
When Ben is in the house now he goes to the fridge,
He eats all the carrots to make his eyes better a little smidge.
One day he went to school and sat a test,
And the carrots made him do his best.
But actually, he saw the answers and got everything right,
And learned that cheating doesn't make him bright.
On Friday in the doctor's waiting room he found a new book,
So he decided to take a look.
He read about spinach and super strength….
Maybe his muscles will grow in length.


  1. POINTS CHARACTERS IN THE STORY

BEN
Ben do not like a vegetable
MOTHER
Ben´s mother want to him to eat a vegetables

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