July 9, 2016
The holiday was perfect to me because it's was my birthday and we have a spaghetti in my birthday, that's all i got in my birthday. Were have a games in the grass and in the computer but i don't want to play in computer i want to play outside, but my brother wants to play in the computer but me i wants to play outside but he is not gonna play outside with me i just played with my baby brother but the ball is too big for him and his getting hurt and i gave him a small ball for him and big ball for me. When my birthday finish then we went to the clinic to have a injection because i'm 11 years old. And we went to the McDonald's restaurant to have our meal and i have a chicken nuggets, hamburger w/cheese, Float, and french fries and is so yummy and tasty. If i 'm in the house i'm gonna play only tablet computer and football in our living room to have some fun. While we eating our baby brother is annoying and his just punching us but it's doesn't hurt because he is a baby and his little han and he wants in all the time to play with us with his ball and our ball. We just play with Our games, Rob lox, School of dragons, Comfy, two player game.net, in our tablet and computer.With This story miss McLeod taught us how to write a recount about our Holidays. I needed to write title, orientation, sequence of events, and personal comments.
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