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Wednesday, 16 November 2016

Fantas-stick!!!


Super stick
Introduction
Hook / questions (no more than 3) Would you like the ultimate object?  Do you want a very strong thing?  Would like your friends envy to you?


Introduce your stick - What you are selling
I would like to offer you a 99% natural stick, with a 1% brain power and 0% fake.




Elaborate, explain or give evidence
Main Point
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Chopsticks
  • You can use it for eating




  • If you don’t have spoon and porks
Main Point
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It will stick with you
  • There will be your buddy




  • There will never ever leave you alone
Main Point
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Paint stick
  • For painting



  • If you don't have not enough money to buy a paint brush
Conclusion
Sum up what you have been talking about
In conclusion I think a stick could be your buddy for a life long then get a stick that would be your buddy just remember don’t get a stick with another stick, get a stick that lonely and needs a friend you would like to  see what they can do, call to the nearest stick shop!!!




Reasons
Elaboration
Persuasive Vocab


Fantas-stick!!!
Would you like one ultimate unique object? Do you want to envy all of you classmate and friends? Do you really want a very strong thing? I offer you this 99% natural, raw stick with 1 % brain power. Did you know that sticks can be chopsticks, a paintbrush and it will be your friend for a long time because it will stick with you!!! Hurry there are very  small group of stick that only need a friend and lonely.

One of my reasons is they could be your chopstick. If you don’t have spoons or forks you can also use it for chopsticks. But, first you will need to wash it and then you can use it for eating. You can use it to eat round food like dumplings, they’re are very slippery to use a spoon so, you'll need the ultimate one perfect stick, chop-stick!!!

The second reason why you should buy the perfect stick because it will be your best buddy in the world!!! If your friends leave you alone your stick-tastic  will never ever leave you alone. It will stick by you for your whole life, it will make you happy. It will be your best, perfect and ultimate stick best friend forever.

Are you sick and tired of having to buy a paint brush? Are you saving your money? I have the perfect gift/solution  for you. I offer you the super stick-brush! Don’t worry about money you can use the super stick brush for life if you are a painter. This could be your success for business and painting. If you are a really good painter you can make it better by buying a stick brush.

In conclusion, I think you should be getting the most powerful stick in the world to be your buddy, because it will be your Paint brush, be your chopsticks and it will stick with you. What are you waiting for? Get your fabulous and most amazing super stick at the nearest stick store today!!! (It's only limited time offer only!)

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