Persuasive writing and plan

this is weak we are doing a persuasive writing. I learnt a lot I learnt I need to check it and what is persuasive vocabulary, I really enjoyed how I change things and add more words and sentence. 

Introduction Hook The Uniform that you wearing are represented the school. What is the argument? I think that we should wear uniform.
	Elaborate, explain or give evidence
Main Point Paragraph 1 it's means you represents the school	It's represents your good school You can’t get lost in public
Main Point Paragraph 2 You won’t ruin your own clothes	You won’t wash your own clothes Your own clothes won’t get tears
Main Point Paragraph Wearing a school uniform- no body gets teased about what they’re wearing	Nobody gets cry Nobody get bully or get teased
Conclusion / Summary Overall it's school students should wear a uniform because it's means you represents the school, means You won’t ruin your own clothes and Wearing a school uniform- no body gets teased about what they’re wearing.

Reasons

Elaboration

Persuasive Vocab      

               No one will get bully

The uniform that you wearing is represent your beautiful school and I think the all students

should wear uniform because it's means you represents the school, means You won’t ruin your own clothes and Wearing a school uniform- no body gets teased about what they’re wearing. Contact the school and order the very cool school uniform.

Firstly, need to wear school uniform because it's means you represents your school, it's represent your kind school and you can’t get lost because you're wearing a school uniform. If you are wearing a random clothes the people arounds you think you have a parents around you and they might think you are just playing that’s a one reason why students should wear school uniform.

Secondly, another reason why students should wear school uniform because you won’t ruin your own clothes, you won’t your own clothes and your own clothes won’t get rips your own clothe. If you are player Rugby or soccer you might get dirty and your clothes might get holes on your clothes and if you chosing a clothes you might get confuse because of your mother or what you because you have a lot of clothes.

Lastly, this is my last reason why students should wear school uniform because Wearing a school uniform- no body gets teased about what they’re wearing, nobody will cry and nobody get bully or teased. If someone is planning a fashion contest they might take it personally and they might fight each other and if someone lost in the fashion contest they might buy a lot of clothes.

Overall it's school students should wear a uniform because it's means you represents the school, means You won’t ruin your own clothes and Wearing a school uniform- no body gets teased about what they’re wearing. Contact your new school and get your beautiful uniform.