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Wednesday, 25 March 2020

Creative Writing Matrix - My remoted controlled Life -

Task:
  • On your way to school last week you found a strange remote lying in the gutter. 
  • Describe the remote, how it looks, feels, weighs etc.
  • While bored in class one day you joked with a friend, pressing the mute button as you aimed it at the teacher. To your surprise the teacher suddenly went silent. 
  • Write a story about your new found power and how it has changed your life… for better or worse!

As I was walking towards my home. A sudden feeling started. The next thing I knew I fell into a gutter. “YUCK!!” I shouted, my mind was filled with getting out of the gutter but as I looked down I saw a shining looking item. It was a golden remote, I picked it out and ran as quickly as I could. Finally, I arrived at home. My mum asked why I was dirty and stinky. I told her the reason, however, I kept the golden remote as a secret so I can use it.  


The weekends pass by minutes. I was getting ready for school, excitement filled my head to show my friends what I found. While I was walking towards my school I started to see a familiar face. It was one of my friends. I hurried over to talk to him. Without even realising, we arrived at school. The bell started to ring, we quickly ran to our lockers and went to our classroom. Our first period was History, I wished I had the power to mute the teacher. Me and my friend had an Idea to get rid of our boredom. We unknowingly muted the teacher. The whole class had strange looks on their faces. We all thought the teacher was pranking us but after a while we realised she wasn’t. Me and my friend were the only ones that knew what was going on. 


Future self

“That was the beginning of my world domination” This golden remote can change the world. On that day I decided to make everyone pause and do whatever I wanted. That was when I made my biggest mistake. Time itself was destroyed, the coexisting realities disappeared. The whole universe went all dark.

1 comment:

  1. What a twist of events you have shared here Reige. Your story line made me want to know what was coming next, well done. I also really like your paragraph about your future self - very clever way to end a story.
    Look forward to reading your next post,
    Miss Morgan

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