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Tuesday, 3 March 2020

Practicing... a Lawyer's Paragraph

1st - Attempt
Iqbal lost his H.R. when he was solf off to bonded labour. Many Children lost their freedom and right to education and other stuff. His family needed money and he was sold and many masters are cruel by working them to sunrise to sunset. The current of the master made them lack food, making them malnourished. Iqbal’s right to have freedom was taken away.
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2nd - Attempt
Iqbal lost his Human Rights when he was sold off to bonded labour. 
He had many ambitions of becoming a lawyer but it was stopped.
Due to bonded labour he couldn’t do what many young childrens do in their
childhood. He was sold off to a master to pay off the debt of his father.
Iqbal’s childhood memories were mostly of working from sunrise to sunset.

Often the masters of Iqbal were cruel and greedy.The Human rights of Iqbal Masih
was taken instantly after he was sold off to bonded labour.


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Another topic

Hussain Khan’s indentured labour of children. Many of Hussain Khan’s labourers
are children. The reason for this is, kids are easy to maintain. First, they would
eat less than adults, making  Hussain Khan’s cost for buying food products would
be less. Second, kids are easy to overpower making them scared to defy the
owner’s command. Lastly, their small delicate hands will work perfectly for the
carpet making. Hussain Khan has many other ways to make his economy become
much better with a horrifying side effect.

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