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Monday, 23 March 2020

Creative Writing Matrix - The sound of Silence -

Today for Matrix, I have chosen the topic called 'The sound of Silence"
What to do:


- Write a paragraph or poem about staying quiet when
you feel like shouting. 
- Why are you being quiet?
- Why do you feel like shouting?
- Use the 5 senses to describe and enhance your
writing- Sight, Smell, Taste, Touch, Hearing.

Results:

It was the time for the examination. Stood quietly in the hallway as I wait. I knew that my room was messy and forgotten that today was inspection day. I never made a mistake that was this bad. As soon as the inspector came into the room, he shouted “Ahhh”. That was when I realised that I really messed up. In the first glimpse of the room I saw the inspector slip on some cans that were on the floor. He got up quickly and looked around the room. He looked into my soul with an annoying glare. He pointed out towards the hallway. I followed his order. He made me stand in the hallway, telling me my mistakes. I wanted to shout my excuses but couldn’t. As I smelled the air of madness he started to tell me what kind of punishments I would get. At that time I tasted one of his wraths. My brain kept telling me to stay quiet, but my heart wanted me to shout. I never understood which one I needed to follow. 


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